Collaboration Update #4

JON

illustration of 3 people flying kites that are charmingly made up of a stop sign, a pair of pants and a fed ex shipping box.

BACO

'I always say that I can't draw' Baco's response to Jon's 'inept paper dolls'.
I always say that I can’t draw — but isn’t drawing just a moving line?

I enjoyed spending some quiet, reflective time with the image, inept paper dolls, that Jon sent to me. And that led to this response piece called, I always say that I can’t draw—but isn’t drawing just a moving line?

Although I mailed the actual piece to Jon, I also sent him photographs of the accordion folded bookwork and the text for the poem via email, since I wasn’t sure how long it would take before he’d receive the physical piece.

The following is the text written on the pages of the bookwork.

I always say
that I can’t
draw —
but isn’t
drawing
just a moving
line?

1.

rough cut
and shadow folds

not quite
hand in hand

but definitely
in proximity.

2.

child-like
wanderings

through neighbourhoods
and interior spaces —

not rooms, per say
but imaginings

that hover
in the body.

3.

as I enlarge
the image

I feel a whispering
in my lungs

each cut out
remains

a silent
speaking.

4.

bend marks
where fingers held

while scissors cut
this walking

through nights
& shadowy dreams —

are these cut outs
Jon?

5.

I’m curious about
the word, “inept”

on the photo’s label —
it makes me think

of the word
“inadequate”

silkscreened by Katarina
on the front of

a used
orange-ish t-shirt.

6.

clothes found at a church
rummage sale

made anew and
sold to fellow artists.

she wondered who
if anyone

would buy that shirt.
yup, it was me

who proudly wore
“inadequate” for years.